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If the first five don’t pull them in, really THE FIRST PAGE Agents lose confidence. Execs minds start to wander. Will they finish reading? Depends on the situation. Here's the secret - they want to keep reading. They want you to be GREAT. They want to find YOU. Ask yourself:

  • Is your main character introduced with purpose?
  • Does your tone lock in the genre?
  • Have you set up the world clearly and economically?
  • Is there a compelling question by page five?

Great pilots launch on page ONE. And I want to help you get there.

🎉 No cost WORKSHOP THIS SATURDAY

"The First Five Pages: Hook the Reader"
🗓️ September 6. 🕙 11AM–1PM EST 💻 On Zoom

I’m offering this 2-hour live workshop to go even deeper. We’ll break down real examples, look at your openings, and I’ll share actionable ways to strengthen your first five pages.

I will be selecting 7 writers to read their first 5 pages live on the workshop call! This is an incredible opportunity to get real-time feedback and learn from watching others. Do YOU want to be one of the seven writers - reply to me immediately.


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